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This is my entry for the spring contest by :iconkaori-yuki-fanclub:

Alexiel and Lucifer after the end of the books naturarly....

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The overall image is Great, its a very interesting scene and the layout is pretty good. The womans expression and pose is very nicely done, though her hair i feel doesnt fit in completely with the shadows shown elsewhere around the image. The man seems to be condensed a little towards the top of the head, but the rest of his body is drawn quite well and in good detail. The Background is good and the sky itself is interesting with its mixtures of tones suggesting the Sunset. The idea around the picture really shows the artists development very well.
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:iconangelgalael:
Wow hun! It turned out so pretty! Great work on the skin shading and Alexiel's hair. The BG is also looking good.:heart:

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thank thee! lol I hate architecture HATTTTEEEEE *blows up a few things**

but doesn't luce-sama look good in one of my drawings for once LMAO

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:iconangelgalael:
My pleasure hun! ..Yes.. architecture sucks arse.. you've seen the last WIP piece I was doing Architecture in..

Oh yes he does.. *knocks Alexiel out and steals him* ..Adios!

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ah but your good at it and backgrounds lol I just suck at both lol and drawing in general lol

oih! *grabs luce and pulls on his arm** miineee!

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Excuse me? I'm good at it? ..It's the first time in my life that I've tried it.. and I use a mouse.. a MOUSE for Hell's unholy sake! ..As if I don't suck myself..

*has a tug-o-war over/with him*

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but if you can do that much awesomeness with a mouse then think what you can do with a tablet when you get one...you shall be a goddess!!
your work is by far improving so much you could go pro in a few years! Must admit I'm pretty envious of your work sometimes

**fights back until his coat rips sending him flying backwards** oohhpppss now youve done it g-chan....

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Nawh, I shall be Luci's wife.. screw goddessness..
:XD:Teeee, thank yous, you flatter me. ..and you know what that does to my ego.. Hnn, there's no need for you to be envious, you're improving rapidly yourself

erhhhh.. IT WASN'T ME! IT WAS HER... *points at the unconcious Alexiel*

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You people are why I create my own version of Luci..

OK, the poses are great
The hair on Alex needs some work, but still very good.
Luci's nose seems a little large, but i can't draw it any better so I give you an 8 out of 10 or 4.5 stars if i could critique.

You should have drawn them eating brownies together...lol

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oh yeah I forgot your fat ego...LMAO whats it like to have people falter you so? LOL
improving on shite isn't that hard darling lol


LUCI: I can see **blows them both up takes alexial and leaves*

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:D thank thee Im gald you like it lol

brownies would have been a good idea LMAO

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Apr 21, 2009, 5:47:14 PM

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